The Drowned City's Lament

Horror (Part 2/3) — ABikram Mondal

The Salt-Caked Scrolls and a Forgotten Name

The silence that followed the screen's sudden blackout was heavier than the sea itself. Raghav felt the residual image of those hollow eyes burned behind his own eyelids. His father, usually a man of booming commands and swift decisions, stood utterly still, his calloused hands clenched at his sides. The air in the cabin, thick with the smell of diesel and salt, suddenly felt thin, as if the very oxygen had been sucked out by whatever they had witnessed.

“It’s a trick of the light,” his father muttered, though his voice lacked its usual conviction. “A statue, maybe. Eroded by the currents.”

Raghav shook his head, the memory too visceral, too unsettling. “Statues don’t turn their heads, Baba. Not like that.” He remembered the faint shimmer, the way the water seemed to stir around her feet, not like inert fabric, but like something living, breathing, in that impossible depth. It was not the cold of the sea that had gripped him, but the cold of recognition, of something profoundly, anciently alive.

The next few days were a blur of restless nights and frantic research. The map, now spread across Raghav’s small study table in their modest home in Alang, became his obsession. He traced its faded lines, the spidery Gujarati script, searching for any clue. The structure wasn’t marked on any known archaeological survey of Dwarka, neither the submerged city off Bet Dwarka nor the earlier findings near Rupen Bandar. This was something else, deeper, older perhaps, or simply forgotten.

His father, meanwhile, oscillated between nervous denial and a burgeoning, dangerous curiosity. The prospect of an unknown, intact structure filled him with a ship-breaker’s instinct for salvage, a treasure hunter’s greed. “Imagine the relics, Raghav. The history. It could make us, son. This could be our fortune.”

But Raghav wasn't thinking of fortune. He was thinking of those eyes. He dove into ancient texts, dusty Puranas, and obscure regional histories, specifically those detailing the multiple submergences of Dwarka, not just the one attributed to Krishna’s departure, but others, lesser known, perhaps mythical. He pored over the Skanda Purana, the Mahabharata, and even local Gujarati folklore collected by British ethnographers in the 19th century, often dismissed as mere superstition.

He found fragments, whispers of a ‘cursed Dwarka’, a city that sank not just due to divine will, but to a human failing, a betrayal. One particular passage, in a poorly translated Marathi manuscript from a Surat library, spoke of a queen, ‘Rukmini of the Salt Lament’, who, in a fit of grief and rage after a devastating personal loss, performed a ritual to bind herself to the city, vowing to guard its secrets until true peace, or utter oblivion, claimed her.

The ritual was archaic, involving a ‘deep sacrifice’ and the invocation of ancient sea spirits, the Jal-Devatas. It spoke of a binding, a merging of life force with the very stones of the city, an eternal vigil. The description of Rukmini, her gauntness, her silent despair, resonated with the image on the screen. Could she be the woman? Was this a queen, forever trapped in a watery tomb?

The history of Dwarka itself was a tapestry of submergences and resurrections. The city, built and rebuilt six times, held layers of forgotten pasts. Raghav focused on the period just before the third major submergence, a time of political upheaval and internal strife, not just external threats. He found mentions of a smaller, satellite settlement, Dwarka-Pran, built slightly offshore, intended as a sanctuary, but which too vanished.

His research was interrupted by his father’s renewed efforts. He had begun making calls, sounding out contacts in the salvage industry, discussing logistics, the potential for a deeper dive. “We need to get inside, Raghav. See what’s there. It’s sitting there, waiting.”

“Waiting for what, Baba?” Raghav asked, his voice tight. “For us to disturb a centuries-old tomb?”

“It’s not a tomb, it’s a find! Think of the recognition. The money.” His father’s eyes, usually so practical, now held a glint of something feverish, a glint Raghav recognised as dangerous. The allure of the unknown, coupled with the promise of wealth, was a potent intoxicant.

Raghav returned to his texts, a growing dread tightening its grip around his chest. He found a chilling detail in the Marathi scroll: the ritual, once performed, could not be undone without a specific counter-ritual, one that involved a ‘reconciliation of elements’ and a ‘sacrifice of belonging’. If disturbed without proper reverence, the guardian, Rukmini, would not merely awaken; she would unleash the ‘Lament of the Deep’, a curse said to bring not just destruction to those who trespassed, but a wider, more profound drowning, a reclaiming by the sea of all that touched the city’s forgotten sorrow.

He pictured his father, a man of grit and ambition, descending into that watery darkness, driven by the gleam of gold, oblivious to the ancient sorrow that lay entombed. The woman’s face, etched in his memory, was not just despair; it was a warning. And his father, with his plans of cranes and deep-sea dives, was walking blindly towards it.

One evening, as the monsoon rains lashed against their windows, Raghav confronted his father with his findings. He laid out the salt-caked scrolls, the translations, the warnings. His father listened, his face impassive, then scoffed. “Folklore, Raghav. Old wives’ tales. You’re a scholar, not a superstitious fisherman.”

“Some folklore is history, Baba. A history written in a different language.”

His father stood up, his towering figure filling the small room. “I’ve faced worse than old wives’ tales in the scrap yards. We’re going back. I’ve already arranged for a submersible, a proper one. We go down tomorrow.”

Raghav felt a cold knot form in his stomach. His father’s resolve, usually a comfort, now felt like a hammer blow. He knew, with a certainty that chilled him to the bone, that they were not merely exploring a ruin. They were about to awaken something that had slept for centuries, something that perhaps should have been left undisturbed. The woman in the depths, her silent lament, was about to find its voice.

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